Most of my experience is writing with a partner.
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That's just a very basic critique.
Haha yeah we need more good writers since so many are disappearing.
I've noticed in the last few bodyswaps of yours that mind at a mind change or in one case it happening for a week. It's just a way to tweak the formula in my you have either been hinting.